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Doodle - RWBY : Best team move ....

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I honestly love the cute chibi style very well. It has the sort of "rushed" sketch look to it, but the shading work is definitely visible and taking literal interpretations of phrases from Rwby sounds hilarious. (Hell you could make a whole comic on that scene with Ruby, Yang and Oobleck making the muscles, truffles, brussels joke).

I'd say if anything that could be improved is perhaps use a bit more vibrant shading with the main piece. The pale pastel tones kind of fade into the background since it's solid white, so using a darker color for the burlap sack would make it "pop" more against the white background.