RWBY Speedpaint : Battle on the sea

Okay, here goes. Look, you are an AMAZING artist, probably the best RWBY artist, but I don't want to just praise you, because that won't help you. Here we go. Firstly, I know this is a speedpaint, but I would have appreciated it more if you had drawn Blake's figure in more detail, her figure looks kind of chalky, especially her cloak which looks kind of strange. The cannon could also be refigured, it looks like she's holding it from the angle at which it is drawn.

Okay, with that out of the way, here's what you did well on: everything else. The sun and waves are absolutely gorgeous and beautiful, I love how you draw the Grimm (seriously, you NEED to draw some fanmade Grimm), and the chalky lines look much better on them, giving them an ethereal appearance. I'm really glad you didn't put Sun because I fel this is Blake's battle. With the exception of Blake I really love this piece, and the landscape is beautiful.